How to Make Dialogue Breathe Life into Your Characters

First of all you must have in your own mind a clear picture of, yes, what they look like, but also what type of person they are. Then you can begin to infuse their speech to reflect that.

Let's look at four types of chracter: people who are either forceful, timid, warm-hearted or critical

To convey these personalities you might use dialogue such as the following:

'Now look here, it's obvious the what we have to do in this situation is rope off the area where the dog show will be. It won't cost that much to find stakes and ropes, and we can't risk small children getting bitten by dogs. I'm sorry but it's got to be done.'

Here's someone who is not used to being countermanded. They know what they want and are determined to get it. They use long confident sentences which are aimed at defying interruption and are couched in such a way as to both quell objection and demand action.

'These tea cakes, well, I did try to get them right but, oh dear, I'm afraid they just didn't, you know, really come up to scratch. What Jane will think I just can't imagine...'

Can you imagine this dear old thing ever saying boo to a goose? She's too worried about what people think of her and too self effacing and lacking in confidence to stand up for herself. Her sentences are hesitant and broken up with 'oh dears' and 'you knows' that reveal her uncertain and timid nature.

'Nonsense, Elsie, they look absolutely scrumptious to me. Everyone loves your tea cakes, you know they do. Come on, tell you what, I'll help you get them in the tin and we'll take them along to the fete together shall we?. Then we'll go and have a nice cup of tea.'

Here is a warm, generous, motherly person who is helpful and kind. She is well able to take people in hand and encourage them along. Her speech is gently modulated with no rough edges. Even the 'Nonsense, Elsie' has the positive intention of making Elsie reconsider her opinion of her cakes and of herself.

'There just aren't enough tables out. And what if it rains? These marquees should have been much bigger. I told the vicar so, of course, but no-one listens to me.'

This person has difficulty finding anything good to say about anything and has probably become somewhat bitter because making friends is not easy when you are so critical. They talk in short curt sentences which are couched in such a way as to rebuff disagreement or comment.

There are many more personality types which you can experiment with and practice constructing dialogue which emphasises the traits and demeaner of your characters. You will find they will be much more enjoyable for your readers to listen to.

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